issues with this character:
- his social status should be apprentice, not hermetic magus at this time
- enemy: jilted lovers at 14? More likely enemy: father of jilted lovers- while his jilted lovers are probably hostile they are unlikely to be of sufficient power and influence to inconvenience even an apprentice magus. Unless he's been seducing royalty, or significantly older women, or men.
- He has 11 points in virtues
- he has 300 xp in abilities, which would put him at over 15 years old, even with educated and privileged upbringing.
- somewhere there should be an indication as to whom the player is for the character