Covenant charter discussion

[OneShot]

@OneShot

Just take Triamore p.34f from "We, the magi of Triamore, ..." to "and the Tribunal of the Rhine". There make the following changes:
(1) Get date and place in the first paragraph right, but keep "under the auspices of the Holy Roman emperor" and the reference to the competent Tribunal. The reference to the competent Tribunal need also replace all the others spread in the text and mentioning the Tribunal of the Rhine or Rhine Tribunal.
(2) Strike out "above all matters" in the second paragraph. The Order of Hermes is no longer capable to challenge Church or King in a subclause of a covenant charter.
(3) Replace "nor fealty to any other Covenant or other body" by "nor fealty to any other Covenant or similar body".
(4) Add after "given under our hand," also "swearing to uphold the charter above",.
(5) Do away with The Oath of the Covenant and its sundry references to House, blood, honor and enemies. The signature to the covenant should suffice, unless a signatary wishes to give a short speech confirming his oath as well.

This proposal has not yet removed the requirement, that every signatary has sworn the Oath of Hermes. Doing so would require major changes to all the text and the obligations signataries enter, and likely introduce three quarters of the Oath through the charter again. Does somebody wish that?

This last proposal of mine fits with the new visible, but weaker Order of Hermes from here. Any comments?