Personally, I agree with Arthur that we shouldn't skimp on vis, and that the spring should be a large source of vis. I worked up the first alternate build mostly as a talking point.
So the second alternate build would have:
Library ([strike]274[/strike] 299 points)
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- Terram summa L23 Q12 (free from the Exceptional Book boon, on the Art that got the most votes)
[*] Rest TBD
Vis Sources (125 points)
- 10 pawns/year in Vim (50 points) -- exact source to be determined
- 10 pawns/year in Aquam (50 points) -- from the spring
- 5 pawns/year in Rego (25 points) -- from the dam of the aqueduct
Vis Stocks ([strike]2 points[/strike] 1 point)
- [strike]10[/strike] 5 pawns of Vim vis (1 point)
Money (1 point)
- 10 pounds of silver (1 point)
Specialists ([strike]42[/strike] 18 points)
- 1 book binder [Skill 6] (6 points)
- [strike]2 illuminators[/strike] 1 illuminator [Skill 6] ([strike]12[/strike] 6 points)
- [strike]2 scribes [Skill 6] (12 points)[/strike]
- [strike]1 ink maker [Skill 6] (6 points)[/strike]
- 1 [strike]percamenarius[/strike] parchment maker [Skill 6] (6 points)
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That's spending 67% (or almost exactly 2/3) of our starting points on the library.