I've had an initial go at the first 21 pages. Disclaimer: I have no particular expertise in proof-reading.
Page number: 6
Column number: 2
Line number:
Word: Ckub
Error type: Typo
Should be: Club
Page number: 6
Column number: 3
Line number: Many
Word: Plot hooks: untitled
Error type: Something gone wrong in the indexing?
Should be: Either delete altogether or replace with something more meaningful
Page number: 6
Column number: 3
Line number: Several
Word: Notes
Error type: Something gone wrong in the indexing?
Should be: Either delete altogether or replace with something more meaningful
Page number: 8
Column number: 1
Line number: Several
Word: Notes
Error type: Something gone wrong in the indexing?
Should be: Either delete altogether or replace with something more meaningful
Page number: 8
Column number: 2
Line number: 7
Word: Notes
Error type: Something gone wrong in the indexing?
Should be: Either delete altogether or replace with something more meaningful
Page number: 8
Column number: 2
Line number: 2nd and 3rd from bottom
Word: “Plot hooks: Peace 134
Plot hooks: Peace 134”
Error type: Repeated entry
Should be: Delete one copy
Page number: 8
Column number: 2 and 3
Line number: Last line of column 2 and first line of column 3
Word: “Plot hooks: Jailbreak? 134
Plot hooks: Jailbreak? 134”
Error type: Repeated entry
Should be: Delete one copy
Page number: 8
Column number: 3
Line number: 8 in initial section, second line of “Sursum” section
Word: Notes
Error type: Something gone wrong in the indexing?
Should be: Either delete altogether or replace with something more meaningful
Page number: 11
Column number: 2
Line number: 6
Word: “constructs a castle, to reawaken the stories of the Once and Future King,”
Error type: Overuse of commas. Possibly a matter of taste rather than a strict error.
Should be: “constructs a castle to reawaken the stories of the Once and Future King,”
Page number: 11
Column number: 3
Line number: 6
Word: “e n c h a n t e d s l e e p ? T h e”
Error type: Formatting (random extra spaces between letters)
Should be: “enchanted sleep? The”
Page number: 12
Column number: 2
Line number: Line 3 of “Magical Disaster”
Word: “o f t h e l a n d a r o u n d M o n t”
Error type: Formatting (random extra spaces between letters)
Should be: “of the land around Mont”
Page number: 12
Column number: 3
Line number: Sidebox title
Word: “on the future :”
Error type: Formatting (gap before “:”)
Should be: “on the future:”
Page number: 13
Column number: 1
Line number: Magi section, bullet point 2
Word: “m a g i s e e k i n g o d d r e s e a r c h”
Error type: Formatting (random extra spaces between letters)
Should be: “magi seeking odd research”
Page number: 13
Column number: 1
Line number: Magi section, bullet point 3
Word: “E x M i s c e l l a n i a i s n a t i v e t o”
Error type: Formatting (random extra spaces between letters)
Should be: “Ex Miscellania is native to”
Page number: 13
Column number: 1
Line number: Magi section, bullet point 3
Word: “Ex Miscellania is native to”
Error type: Missing bullet point
Should be: “*Ex Miscellania is native to”
Page number: 13
Column number: 2
Line number: Bullet point 2
Word: “House Tytalus and Tremere may clash in Cornwall, as it is situated between their Domus Magnae in Brittany and Wales.”
Error type: Canon error. Blackthorn is not the Tremere Domus Magna.
Should be: ? Change to Tytalus Domus Magna and a major Tremere House covenant in Wales?
Page number: 13
Column number: 2
Line number: Companions and Grogs section, line 1
Word: “Cornish characters, from humble backgrounds”
Error type: Grammar – surplus comma
Should be: “Cornish characters from humble backgrounds”
Page number: 13
Column number: 3
Line number: Sidebox, paragraph 3 line 2
Word: “William’s the Conqueror’s”
Error type: Grammar – surplus apostrophe
Should be: “William the Conqueror’s”
Page number: 15
Column number: 3
Line number: Sidebox 1
Word: The entire box contents
Error type: Repeated content; same text is found at the start of page 13
Should be: Delete one copy
Page number: 16
Column number: 2
Line number: Paragraph 2, line 8
Word: “Part of this was to allow his guest”
Error type: Single when should be plural
Should be: “Part of this was to allow his guests”
Page number: 16
Column number: 3
Line number: Sidebox, first paragraph line 4
Word: “Can the magi steal way skilled”
Error type: Typo
Should be: “Can the magi steal sway skilled”
Page number: 16
Column number: 3
Line number: Sidebox, third paragraph line 7
Word: “or control their the parameters”
Error type: Extra word
Should be: “or control the parameters”
Page number: 17
Column number: 1
Line number: First paragraph, line 4
Word: “(the last comprehensive census.”
Error type: Missing bracket
Should be: “(the last comprehensive census).”
Page number: 19
Column number: 1
Line number: Sidebox, 1226
Word: “forbid-den”
Error type: Typo
Should be: “forbidden”
Page number: 19
Column number: 1
Line number: Sidebox, 1230
Word: “Being in the Royal Navy is not permitted under the code”
Error type: Historical nitpicking – I don’t think it was called the “Royal Navy” until the restoration of the Monarchy (Henry VIII had the “Navy Royal”, but I don’t think that goes back to 1220 either). This one may be deliberate.
Should be: ?
Page number: 20
Column number: 1
Line number: Sidebox, paragraph 2, line 1
Word: “At Anthony”
Error type: Typo?
Should be: “St Anthony”
Page number: 21
Column number: 2
Line number: Sidebox, paragraph 4, line 10
Word: “at at neap tides”
Error type: Repeated word?
Should be: “and at neap tides” ?