Yes, yes I did. Clearly my proof-reading requires proof-reading.
Please do tell me if there's a consistent class of "error" you're rejecting, and I'll stop flagging them.
I've done another 10 pages, up to the end of page 30:
Page number: 22
Column number: 2
Line number: First paragraph, line 7
Word: “Their national dish is a miner’s pastry.”
Error type: Historical nitpick. Whilst pasties did exist in the time period, I don’t think they became a Cornish miner thing until around the 17th Century.
Should be: ?
Page number: 22
Column number: 2
Line number: Second paragraph, line 3
Word: “Its a tin oxide”
Error type: Punctuation – missing apostrophe
Should be: “It’s a tin oxide”
Page number: 22
Column number: 2
Line number: Second paragraph, line 4
Word: “d e s c r i b e d a s b l a c k s a n d .”
Error type: Formatting (random extra spaces between letters)
Should be: “described as black sand.”
Page number: 22
Column number: 2
Line number: Third paragraph, line 11
Word: “R i c h a r d e s s e n t i a l l y h a d a”
Error type: Formatting (random extra spaces between letters)
Should be: “Richard essentially had a”
Page number: 22
Column number: 3
Line number: Side box: Plot hooks: Creating food
Word: “m i g h t b e s a v e d b y p l a y e r c h a r a c t e r s , t e a c h i n g t h e m discretion, or punished by player c h a r a c t e r s , t e a c h i n g t h e m”
Error type: Formatting (random extra spaces between letters)
Should be: “might be saved by player characters , teaching them discretion, or punished by player characters , teaching them”
Page number: 22
Column number: 3
Line number: Side box: Plot hooks: Tin pest, line 2
Word: “sometimes rust back”
Error type: Typo
Should be: “sometimes rusts back”
Page number: 22
Column number: 3
Line number: Side box: Plot hooks: Tin pest, line 2
Word: “appreaing”
Error type: Spelling mistake
Should be: “appearing”
Page number: 23
Column number: 1
Line number: Paragraph 3, line 10
Word: “”Damps” (gases) may “distemper their heads””
Error type: Missing punctuation
Should be: “”Damps” (gases) may “distemper their heads”.”
Page number: 23
Column number: 3
Line number: Paragraph 2, line 2
Word: “There’s a type of banking in Cornwall allows”
Error type: Missing word
Should be: “There’s a type of banking in Cornwall that allows”
Page number: 24
Column number: 3
Line number: Sidebox, Visions paragraph
Word: “Some people who have dreams which reveal the location of valuable loads.”
Error type: Extra word
Should be: “Some people have dreams which reveal the location of valuable loads.”
Page number: 24
Column number: 3
Line number: Sidebox, Visions paragraph
Word: “valuable loads.”
Error type: Spelling
Should be: “valuable lodes.”
Page number: 26
Column number: 1
Line number: Paragraph 1
Word: “Wood is far to precious”
Error type: Spelling
Should be: “Wood is far too precious”
Page number: 26
Column number: 1
Line number: Paragraph 1
Word: “Slate, which is slower but surer than rough, when building.”
Error type: Missing words?
Should be: ?
Page number: 26
Column number: 1
Line number: Paragraph 1
Word: “and its found”
Error type: Missing apostrophe
Should be: “and it’s found”
Page number: 26
Column number: 2
Line number: Paragraph 1, line 3
Word: “C o v e n a n t o f S u r s u m i n t o”
Error type: Formatting (random extra spaces between letters)
Should be: “Covenant of Sursuminto”
Page number: 26
Column number: 3
Line number: Paragraph 1, line 1
Word: “F e w C o r n i s h p e o p l e f a r m ,”
Error type: Formatting (random extra spaces between letters)
Should be: “Few Cornish people farm,”
Page number: 26
Column number: 3
Line number: Paragraph 1, line 1
Word: “F e w C o r n i s h p e o p l e f a r m ,”
Error type: Formatting (random extra spaces between letters)
Should be: “Few Cornish people farm,”
Page number: 27
Column number: 1
Line number: Paragraph 2, line
Word: “but beef, leather, tallow are”
Error type: Replace last comma with and
Should be: “but beef, leather and tallow are”
Page number: 27
Column number: 1
Line number: Paragraph 5, line 4
Word: “C o r n i s h p e o p l e l o v e”
Error type: Formatting (random extra spaces between letters)
Should be: “Cornish people love”
Page number: 27
Column number: 2
Line number: Paragraph 1, line 3
Word: “r a i l s , p a r t r i d g e s , p h e a s a n t s ,”
Error type: Formatting (random extra spaces between letters)
Should be: “rails, partridges, pheasants,”
Page number: 27
Column number: 2
Line number: Paragraph 2, line 7
Word: “porpoise, whale. salmon,”
Error type: Punctation – full-stop should be another comma
Should be: “porpoise, whale, salmon,”
Page number: 27
Column number: 3
Line number: Sidebar, Paragraph 3, line 14
Word: “or its a”
Error type: Punctation – missing apostrophe
Should be: “or it’s a”
Page number: 28
Column number: 1
Line number: Sidebar (Aquaculture), Paragraph 3, line 17
Word: “and the covenant can grow barnacles, including the goose barnacle, has a mature form indistinguishable from a bird.”
Error type: Sentence doesn’t make sense
Should be: ? “and the covenant can grow barnacles, including the goose barnacle, which has a mature form indistinguishable from a bird.”
Page number: 28
Column number: 2
Line number: Paragraph 1, line 3
Word: “t h e p o r t f o r t h e c a s t l e o f”
Error type: Formatting (random extra spaces between letters)
Should be: “the port for the castle of”
Page number: 28
Column number: 2
Line number: Paragraph 2, line 1
Word: “T h e b i g g e s t m a r k e t i s a t”
Error type: Formatting (random extra spaces between letters)
Should be: “The biggest market is at”
Page number: 28
Column number: 3
Line number: Sidebox, Paragraph 1, line 2
Word: “g i v e s b o r o u g h c h a r t e r s t o”
Error type: Formatting (random extra spaces between letters)
Should be: “gives borough charters to”
Page number: 29
Column number: 2
Line number: Paragraph 3, line 3
Word: “i n c l u d e a n c h o r a g e , k e e l a g e”
Error type: Formatting (random extra spaces between letters)
Should be: “include anchorage, keelage”
Page number: 30
Column number: 3
Line number: Paragraph 1, line 10
Word: “a r e m a i n s t a y s o f t h e l a t e r”
Error type: Formatting (random extra spaces between letters)
Should be: “are main stays of the later”
Page number: 30
Column number: 3
Line number: Paragraph 1, line 23
Word: “wax (12d per hundred pounds) “All other wares, exported or imported,”
Error type: Missing punctuation.
Should be: ? “wax (12d per hundred pounds), “[a]ll other wares, exported or imported,”
Page number: 30
Column number: 1
Line number: Sidebox “Shape and Materials Bonuses” line 2
Word: “Agate: Protection from venom 7, Protection from storms 5, Storms 3”
Error type: Canon error – last entry should be Air, not Storms
Should be: “Agate: Protection from venom 7, Protection from storms 5, Air 3”
Page number: 30
Column number: 1
Line number: Sidebox “Shape and Materials Bonuses” line 2
Word: “Storms 3 Boat: Sailing 3”
Error type: Missing bullet point.
Should be: “Storms 3
*Boat: Sailing 3” (or actually Air 3...)
Page number: 30
Column number: 1
Line number: Sidebox “Shape and Materials Bonuses” line 7
Word: “Chisel: Shatter stone 2”
Error type: Canon error – “Mason chisel” should be Shape Stone 2
Should be: “Chisel: Shape stone 2”
Page number: 30
Column number: 1
Line number: Sidebox “Shape and Materials Bonuses” line 9
Word: “Copper: Effect own shape 4, Deft-ness 3, Passion 2, Sex magic 2”
Error type: Canon error – should also include Bloodshed 3
Should be: “Copper: Effect own shape 4, Deftness 3, Bloodshed 3, Passion 2, Sex magic 2”
Page number: 30
Column number: 1
Line number: Sidebox “Shape and Materials Bonuses” line 9
Word: “Copper: Effect own shape 4, Deft-ness 3”
Error type: Canon error – Deftness should be 4
Should be: “Copper: Effect own shape 4, Deftness 4”
Page number: 30
Column number: 2
Line number: Sidebox “Shape and Materials Bonuses” line 10
Word: “Mirror: Display images 7, See truth 6, Summon and bind ghosts 5, Illusions 2”
Error type: Canon error – bonuses are mixed up
Should be: “Mirror: Illusions 7, Display images 6, See the truth 5, Summon or bind ghosts 3”
Page number: 30
Column number: 3
Line number: Sidebox “Shape and Materials Bonuses” line 2
Word: “Sail: Sailing 4”
Error type: Canon error – bonus is wrong and missing a bonus
Should be: “Sail: Sailing 7, Affect winds 4”
Page number: 30
Column number: 3
Line number: Sidebox “Shape and Materials Bonuses” line 6
Word: “Shovel: Move or destroy earth 4”
Error type: Canon error – not calling a spade a spade
Should be: “Spade: Move or destroy earth 4”
Page number: 30
Column number: 3
Line number: Sidebox “Shape and Materials Bonuses” line 12
Word: “ Tin “diamond”: Aquam 5 (as per crystal) ”
Error type: Canon error – crystals have a bonus for water-related effects rather than general Aquam.
Should be: “ Tin “diamond”: Water-related effect 5 (as per crystal) ”
I’m also not sure where “Serpent glass ring: Control and ward serpents 6” comes from, although it might just be from a later book than the compiled master list covers.