Ourimandias Ex Flambeau

taking both compulsion and obsession for order is not appropriate- the two are so close that you cannot benefit from each.
a puissant ignem and fear of fire seems very contradictory, and the theme of ironic fears as jumped the shark at this point.
elemental magic does not give you free arts in the three elements you have not studied, but does require that you put some of your apprenticeship points into all of the elemental forms- since every time you study one of the arts you get one experience point in the rest of them, which must be simulated by spending points accordingly.
Also as has been noted in the forums, mage errants to not have a guaranteed living without a covenant, and you need to account for how you have survived since your gauntlet.