Posting my reformulated Julien below, I'll edit/update the post over in the other thread after some commentary
So, the concept behind him is still similar, he'll make wrong choices, or at least actions are likely to be misunderstood. With his thick tongue (afflicted tongue) he can never really explain himself well, and reinforcing that with poor communication is just driving it all home. He's no longer so dangerously inept in battle. He's quite capable, in fact. His inability to give intelligible orders, and the general circumstance of something going wrong around him, leaving him holding the bag, has held him back for promotion to turb seargent.
He's just never caught a break. He's the guy who gets caught when things go south.
Julien
Characteristics: Int 0, Per +1, Pre 0, Com -4, Str +2, Sta +3, Dex +2, Qik 0
Size: 0
Age: 35 (35), Height: 5'8'', Weight: 170 lbs, Gender: Male
Decrepitude: 0
Warping Score: 0 (0)
Virtues and Flaws: Custos, Martial Abilities, Puissant Single Weapon, Affinity with Single Weapon, Afflicted Tongue [Spells Using Words: Extra botch die], Judged Unfairly, Poor Communication × 1
Personality Traits: Loyal +3, Brave +1
Combat:
Axe & Shield, Heater: Init: 1, Attack +16, Defense +13, Damage +8
Kick: Init: 3, Attack +6, Defense +3, Damage +5
Dodge: Init: 2, Attack , Defense +3, Damage
Fist: Init: 2, Attack +5, Defense +3, Damage +2
Soak: +10
Fatigue levels: OK, 0, 1, 3, 5, Unconscious
Wound Penalties: 1 (1 5), 3 (6 10), 5 (11 15), Incapacitated (16 20), Dead (21+)
Abilities: Area Lore: Normandy 4 (monsters), Area Lore: Brittany 2 (monsters), Awareness 5 (in combat), Latin 3, Brawl 3 (Kick), Carouse 3 (with fighting friends), Folk Ken 1 (magi), Great Weapon 4 (pole axe), Guile 3 (getting extra rations), Leadership 1 (in combat), Norman French 5 (military talk), Order of Hermes Lore 2 (grogs), Single Weapon 7+2 (Shield, Heater), Stealth 2 (when armored), Survival 1 (when in a group) (2), Thrown Weapon 3 (knife), Covenant Lore: Le Maison d'Levrier 2 (grogs)
Equipment: Shield, Heater (Init: 0; Atk: 0; Dfn: +3; Str: 0; Cost: Standard); Full Metal Scale Armor (Soak: 10) (Soak: 10; Protection: 7); Pack
Encumbrance: 2 (4)
But keep it, it's still a great choice and will still prove useful. But with -7 to most verbal interactions, he's... Well, he'd better shut up, I guess :-/