Morning Briefs
Markoko is Stupid!
Fixer, the coment I made about your character had nothing to do with your character at all! That was for Boxer, but then I changed my comment for Boxer and gave him a Greenlight. The Green Lantern joke was meant for Scott, but Boxer does have a green light. Scott, your character is green lighted to go up on the board as well. Octavian, you are good to go too. I think Marie is good. Am I missing anyone? Who else thinks they are ready?
Do you guys have Edit functions for your posts? If not, I will ask Wendy again. We will use Edit correct and advance our characters in play, adjusting them as the story goes.
Jarkman,
I just read your notes on Barcelona. Awesome! Can Florenzo be a member of Barcelona? Please? I know his name is out of place. I have a habit of using Spanish names of people I know or once knew. But Florenzo would be an excellent connection between the two covenants. He kisses up to Carlus and is jealous of his apprentice.
Ken,
I really dig the exposition and narrative for Buttercup (that’s her nickname now, even if you give her a different official name, Buttercup has etched into my memory )
Seriously though, good stuff I enjoyed it.
I totally understand why the two visiting wizards did it. It was the only thing to do. And I have a hunch who the unnamed court magician may be. If you want one of the unknown hooks to do what I think you are gonna do, you have the blessing of the Green Light of my Silver Hammer.
Xavi,
I like what you are doing in the main forum with the character development. I will step back, other than to say some sort of Mythic Blood would be an excellent touch. Any kind of Mythic Blood at all. And I like the ambivalent gender angle
Xalbador,
Needs to finish development!
Muttonbone!
Have you found a place to fit into this fray yet?
Fixer,
I have a ward commentary for a separate post. And you will be most interested in the lab post.
Max,
I like the combination of Flawless and Mercurian Magic 8) Interesting use of Method Caster. The Necessary Condition Flaw needs to apply to all your magic. Also, spells are a Lab Activity, not a generic 10 per season activity. You are way ripping yourself off that way, because you can easily pull a much higher lab total. And you don’t have to set up a Lab. You originally said you are not a member, though interestingly enough, you tie your background to the region. So you have two choices. One; You ARE a member, and build up your lab as normal. Or Two; You are Not a member, and may walk into a lab already prepared for you and maintained by House Mercere. If you choose the first option, see my ruling on Labs. If you choose the second, I will make a lab for you and you can just turn the key.
Jean Michelle
Your Lyric Poetry is excellent! Yes, Flambeau magi dig musicals, operas, and WWII era fight songs!
Octavian,
I love your story man! You drew on old HoH-Iberia really heavy. I must say I admire that, as there is a lot of cool stuff there. But, I do want to dial down the Infernal tone. There is no demon or demon dealings in Barcelona. Nix that and nix any suggestions that the Knights of Santiago or the Templars have anything to do with the Infernal. There are heretics in the suburbs though.
Anyway, some comments on your story. Spread the Evil . I don’t want to single out one religion or another. To me, the Reconquista is more about culture and politics than anything else. There were Christians and Muslims on both sides. I mean, the situation was actually quite complex, and Nova de Tolosa is even more complicated. Either there were Infernal dealings on both sides, playing a macae game of chess for sport, or neither side had an Infernal alliance, nor a Divine one. It was just war. OR, and this is the theory I favor, it was way more complicated than even that.
You were not at Nova de Tolosa. Have what theories you may. But you here a lot of rumors about magi who were never there. No one will talk openly about it. The Quaesitors are interested, but House Tremere will order you to let matters lie. And you met the Knights of Senecas while marching on the Shadows. You know Santiago and Roberto , and met them at Duresca. Santiago killed Rassus just before he met Ryce and Tenebrous.
All this criticism for a story I think is great! I am sorry . No need to change anything at all. You remember things from your point of view. You think Antonio was all harsh on you, begrudgingly accepting you and made you memorize their lore. From his point of view, he eagerly recruited you. He was just pissed when Santiago insisted that Roberto be placed in Novus Mane (you met Santiago and Roberto at Durenmar). He then had you study up on their lore because he really thinks it is good for you. He also thinks it is a load of crap that some old fart made up, but he sees a deeper meaning in it all. You represent Temperance most of all, as well as Courage and Loyalty. Your Wisdom is yet to be judged
And I dig the talisman. I caught the gypsy reference there. The Gigitanos were not in Spain yet (I don’t think so anyway), but they most certainly were in Mythic Iberia ! That is an excellent link to your original idea!